Very nice haiku.You should enter the poetry.com daily haiku contest.I read your biography and I like poemhunter, too. a ten from me for good poetry form-those syllables can be really tricky sometimes especially when trying to say so much with so little words.I write haiku also.
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wow a poem creates yes its own new world a new idea spreads in the world and creates a million tributaries...lovely idea :))