Thursday, August 15, 2013

Haggard Hawk Comments

Rating: 5.0

A haggard hawk curiously dropped
A chip of stone on the water of a pond
And created a wave of tricky trap
A frog jumped up thinking that
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Abdul Wahab
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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

many times a stone is dropped causing a tricky tray. beware dear friend.

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David Wood 16 August 2013

An interesting poem about the hard facts of nature all around us. I like it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 August 2013

Nice story with a moral. Beautifully presented. Thank you.

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