Had You? Comments
Had you forget the time you knock on my door?
One sweet touch and its wide open
Then we drawn on expected courtesy
I’d serve you the best corner to decorate
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Visual passion expressed through colours of the heart..flooding the world with love.....beautiful work....I liked the tender voice of the speaker...it gives the piece warmth...nicely penned 10
it would be better if you tried to use the rhyme............but it is spectacular.......amazing.........and enjoyable to read........awesome write...
Somewhere behind the rainbow, I had lost you.Had me really lost you?
wonderful and meaningful.last para top it all. beautiful write voted10 surya
'Though I always fall for reason and alibi I’d try to be fair ‘till the end of our line '...these two lines are more touching than the others..but the others are more detailed than these 2 lines...it is very beautiful.. had you kept me in your heart? or had it been forgotten? hope you had not hope you have not...grace
It’s been a pleasure to welcome you back Surrender with the thought of sharing you the grand life I lit the flame to cuddle your mind and let the time be our charm '''''' had u decided to.... full invitation and getting confirmation... good imagination well weighed words... good write......10. Read mine ' brown eyes' and' butterflies aroudn>
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