Wednesday, November 22, 2017

Had I Not Sing! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Had I not sing
in such a nice moment
just because
the dancing wing
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Binayakumar Mohanty
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Ansuman Srichetak 07 November 2018

The bees busy in their nuptial flight.Nicely crafted poem.

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Asochya Sidhatapa 07 November 2018

Dancing wing of butterfly landing in to cup of tea.Nice imagery used.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 November 2018

The champak bud opening its nascent petals could not control its emotion.- -i smiled at the end after finishing reading your poem. lovely imagination..... the flowers, birds, butterflies, the tea cup and the priest and his hymns. lovely dear poet. tony

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