Friday, November 1, 2013

Had I Have - Two Wide Wings Comments

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Had I have - two wide wings …….
Could fly in that unbound sky,
Floating along with those white flying clouds
To reach to the silvery moon
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 31 March 2014

At times wishing I had two wings to escape the sorrows and pain of life on earth. Would love to stay aloft forever and feel the feelings of freedom and independence so insatiateingly desired. But, alas, there is no escape from life while we are living it. Enjoyed the rhythm and melody of this poem, Amitava. Great one. RoseAnn

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Patricia Grantham 21 November 2013

A very beautiful and haunting write wanting to have two wings. If we could take wings and fly to places that we would love to be it would give us much pleasures. A lofty wish indeed. I can feel your desires and wants. Come down to earth and enjoy life good or bad! Nice write. I have a poem called Be Thankful please take a look.

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Valsa George 07 November 2013

A poem deeply moving! We all have unsatiated longings and wish to fly away from a world of loneliness and isolation! But such escapism is not possible! We have to face life with stoic courage and accept realities in their stride!

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David Wood 02 November 2013

A lovely poem that is also sad.

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