Wednesday, June 3, 2015

Habits To Leave Behind Comments

Rating: 4.5

Above the dripping darkness
Of my black hair
The same hair your hands
Got lost in
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Susan Lacovara
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Seamus O Brian 27 September 2016

very meditative. Poignant and reflective. I am drawn in to the circle of dissipated smoke, to listen closer and hope I hear more.... :)

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Melissa Tamayo 03 June 2015

Habits of all kinds are quite difficult to let go. Nicely detailed and a great description

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 03 June 2015

Very true of many men as well as women. Why people behave this way? You drive at the point straight forward. Nicely crafted in to a poem. I enjoyed. I rate it high.

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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