Above the dripping darkness
Of my black hair
The same hair your hands
Got lost in
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Habits of all kinds are quite difficult to let go. Nicely detailed and a great description
Very true of many men as well as women. Why people behave this way? You drive at the point straight forward. Nicely crafted in to a poem. I enjoyed. I rate it high.
very meditative. Poignant and reflective. I am drawn in to the circle of dissipated smoke, to listen closer and hope I hear more.... :)