Monday, November 30, 2009

H0ld Me Close & Never Let Me G0 Comments

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YOUR T00 FAR AWAY
BUT WHEN YOUR AROUND ME
PLEASE JUST STAY
HOLD ME CLOSE & NEVER LET ME G0
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Nicole Love
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~~ ayani~~ 02 December 2009

i luv nothing better than a tight hug

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Deborah Cromer 30 November 2009

Feelings known all too well by many. Your poem expresses a feeling felt by so many. You were able to write down what you feel and how you think to create this. Emotions and thoughts are what is needed to write. Putting thoughts down and bringing them out is writing in action. Debbie

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