Tuesday, July 7, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

&& it’s just *another*
H e a r t break
into the
*emergency*
...
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Matthew Harrison 11 August 2009

Yeah, interesting style (with the expressive punctuation) , but well structured and written. Loved it, overall.

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Alex Lewis 07 July 2009

This poem is written very interestingly. The title especially throws me off. I know this is a good poem, because I have to think about it. The plot was great and the ending was 'Romeo and Juliet'-esque. But, that's no problem because whenever two lovers die it is now referred to as 'Romeo and Juliet'. (That was a compliment) . Great poem! P.S. Check out my poetry!

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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