Monday, September 18, 2006

(h) 6 (Dedications) You Shall Always Live In Us Comments

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You slipped away quietly
From the realms of this mortal world
Away from all pains, very rightly
Leaving behind your loved ones and hurled
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Ernestine Northover 19 September 2006

So moving and so masterful. A delight to read, and brought a lump to my throat. A lovely piece of poetry. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Catastrophe King 18 September 2006

You slipped those tears into my eyes; quietly From the heart and soul of this poetic piece..... All your words. They belong to us. Very rightly...............

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 September 2006

A rare poem, so powerful I'm speechless...

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Prasanna Kumari 18 September 2006

you bring out the pain of unbearable loss in powerful words

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Ashish R 18 September 2006

Thats a great tribute to your 'Papaji'.He must be beaming with pride up there if he reads this. Ashish.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 September 2006

T. O.>>>Your flair for impassioned Verse is quite moving, toung lady! This is a text-book example of my claim...A Fine Penning, my dear'''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Nalini Hebbar 18 September 2006

TO...i relate to this very much since i lost both my parents 14 years back...there was so much left to do together...love...nalini

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Preeti - is here! 18 September 2006

This is a lovely tribute, it's sad, but its celebrating life of your Papaji, and thats the way it should be. Preets

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David Darbyshire 18 September 2006

very nice read Tran, dave have a nice day xxx

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