You slipped away quietly
From the realms of this mortal world
Away from all pains, very rightly
Leaving behind your loved ones and hurled
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You slipped those tears into my eyes; quietly From the heart and soul of this poetic piece..... All your words. They belong to us. Very rightly...............
you bring out the pain of unbearable loss in powerful words
Thats a great tribute to your 'Papaji'.He must be beaming with pride up there if he reads this. Ashish.
T. O.>>>Your flair for impassioned Verse is quite moving, toung lady! This is a text-book example of my claim...A Fine Penning, my dear'''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
TO...i relate to this very much since i lost both my parents 14 years back...there was so much left to do together...love...nalini
This is a lovely tribute, it's sad, but its celebrating life of your Papaji, and thats the way it should be. Preets
So moving and so masterful. A delight to read, and brought a lump to my throat. A lovely piece of poetry. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX