Tuesday, August 18, 2020

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Rating: 5.0

The Bee sucks honey
Engraves a blue elegy
Flower's death is near
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 30 August 2020

A beautiful verse describing the circle of life.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 August 2020

A well penned poem. Truly amazing.......10++++

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Varsha M 18 August 2020

Well written we all are connected to one another serving and being served as we complete our journey on earth. Well expressed.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 August 2020

MB of BD ... SUCK honey You WILL LIKE MY POEM SPECIALLY for YOU..... Magnetic Boy Handsome Very Handsome - -/Teens Girls from 16 to 40 came to him virgins some desirous of his/him his Guru ji told him gals will fall like 9 pins even he had an eye but was not shy gay he wasn't but he knew the magnet was a present they both enjoyed like normal boys

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Aarzoo Mehek 18 August 2020

That's how life sums up. A beautiful death at the hands of it's admirer. Loved the thought.10++

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