Where do you go to Gypsy Rose,
When you retire to your bed?
Where do you go to Gypsy Rose,
What dreams play inside your head?
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A lovely poem Jak. What appears to be so attractive may not be what we wish for...10
Beautiful poem Jak, yes all that glitters is not gold!
Perceived perfumery, love is the key; as you are seen everywhere. Nice piece of work.
open 'your' arms BUT don't run to the future. not bad advice. unless you want to be a professional running back or soccer forward, or marathoner. i like that you did not force rhymes into each line. when i moved from stanza one to # 2, i wondered if Rose was a sleepwalker. there once was a stripper named Gypsy Rose; same gal? :) bri