Gypsy Girl Comments

a year ago i read and commented. i really don't care for it. let me grab another! bri :)

Wonderful poem, we all want to be able to feel truly free but we rarely are.

very interesting read..you can feel the up's and down's as you read.. Annette

Beautiful yet painful write. Still many lives may be hidden like Gypsy girl's life. Loved reading from beginning till end.

Roam to the unknown! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

i'm with Valsa on this one: Honestly I couldn't catch much! let me read another. bri :)

An intriguing write! Honestly I couldn't catch much! Who is this beautiful gypsy girl who hides a lot of fear inside, but doesn't show it out! Is it a projection of your own self? A great write, Lyn!

An interesting read, Lyn. Does the nurterer (parent?) feel a sense of guilt/angst because of her daughter's insecurity, anguish, reticence. I pray this is not a true reflection of your own mother/daughter circumstance.

(((HUG))) Poor gypsy girl. A beautiful, moving write.

You get the impression of something true in life's movement.

Written like a free spirit with an open heart

Like diamond moon her beauty shines. Her wings of power are so amazingly laugh with imagery drawn here. Lighting up the room with this power and beauty is interesting.10