Gyms And Gin Comments

well..........is this all life is about? i wonder

Stunning write. Powerful image. Message received. HG: -) xx

'A steady berating of bereavement' - the repitition of this powerful line resounds in this punishing piece. The torturing of mind and body amongst 'breathless endeavours' and 'restless moments' is quite palpable. Another strong piece where the choice of language, the repititions and the pace have been cleverly engineered. j x

Your powers of observation in combination with talent astound me! I think it is a an elder`s man mind in a body of a young man in your case. Very well-penned and strong stuff!

Hi David powerful stuff....beautifully written......thanks LOve, D.

One to sweat on I see... I'll check for Steroids and Seratone supplies..

Real strong emotions and sublime eloqunce as ever good stuff Nik

Wow Man, what an amazing insight... love this line its poetry magic - like a locomotive on uphill auto pilot. i cannot rest, i cannot stop, ruddy marvelous....sorry it'll have to be a 10 from me. stay strong bro Jon.