Saturday, July 24, 2021
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Rating: ★4.8
There was a room of darkness
Which was our weakness...
We were restricted to that room
You gave us the magical broom...
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Chinedu Dike
31 December 2021
Beautiful lines nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched......
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Sylvia Frances Chan
25 July 2021
True Guru, marvelously told. I have enjoyed raeding this lovely poem. Thank you so much for sharing
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8/2/2025 11:38:21 AM # 1.0.0
This piece struck my heart well! It's a beautiful poem fully expressing the love of the father_ please do consider reading a few of my poems notably 'Everything if you leave me' (it's somewhat similar to this one)