Friday, November 11, 2011

' Gurgling Stream [revised] Comments

Rating: 2.7

Knowing the little alien in my head was filled
with discontent went to French class prepared
full well with a treat for it, Offenbach played on
an earphone in only the left ear
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Margaret Alice Second
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John Richter 26 January 2015

A veritable whirlwind of notions and surprises! Stepping into your world is most wonderful - and I should guess quite akin to stepping through Alice's looking glass! Well done poet. I was looking for the sour cream, though. Did I tell you what the mayonnaise said to the person who opened the refrigerator door? 'Close the door! I'm.... dressing.'

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