Sunday, May 24, 2015

Gunslinger Ruthie [i Mean Lucy! ] … [vengeance; Inspired By Ruth Walter’s Poem “nobody Spoke (For Karen) ”; Short-Medium Length; Rejection] Comments

Rating: 3.3

In her early years in grammar school …
other students treated Lucy like a fool.
She wished to be part of a peer group,
but the others, to that, said: “Poop! ”
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Bri Edwards
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kyvin nash 15 January 2021

Good storyline... Its flowing, rhymes in a good way...lovely...its seems like a true crime drama...good poem bri! ! !

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Darlene Walsh 12 June 2015

For some reason, as I read this poem, I thought of the name Carrie? Both guns and fire can be dangerous in an angry persons hands. Classic story of being bullied, and then reacting (or over reacting) to the pain it has caused. A subject I know very well. I'm certainly glad I never got to the point of 'as each day she bangs her head and scratches the wall.'

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Eugene Levich 03 June 2015

Sounds like my kinda gal! Do you have her email address?

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Akhtar Jawad 31 May 2015

Enjoyed this touching poem.

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