Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, December 6, 2013

Guns Silenced Comments

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Gun have been silenced
Borders are quiet and peace is chanced
Great tragedy is averted
The larger interest is asserted
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2013

nice APARNA SURESH11 minutes ago it tells about war and clarion call to peace Comment 0 excellent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2013

Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi13 minutes ago very good thinking written very well

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2013

nice malenky malenky13 minutes ago let guns stay down Comment +1 It's OK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2013

Hashan Mannan9 minutes ago It's OK, but theme or story is not clear or well expressed. Punctuation are also required. Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2013

Nicole Sanom13 minutes ago powerful poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2013

The start was strong D A3 minutes ago The start of the poem was strong, i liked it, then towards the own it started to lose depth and starting losing emotion. For me. Good message thou.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2013

Mohammad Jahoorul Islam likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Gajanan Mishra 06 December 2013

uphold the humanity, good write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2013

Gun have been silenced Borders are quiet and peace is chanced

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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