Gun have been silenced
Borders are quiet and peace is chanced
Great tragedy is averted
The larger interest is asserted
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Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi13 minutes ago very good thinking written very well
nice malenky malenky13 minutes ago let guns stay down Comment +1 It's OK
Hashan Mannan9 minutes ago It's OK, but theme or story is not clear or well expressed. Punctuation are also required. Comment +1 good
The start was strong D A3 minutes ago The start of the poem was strong, i liked it, then towards the own it started to lose depth and starting losing emotion. For me. Good message thou.
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Gun have been silenced Borders are quiet and peace is chanced
nice APARNA SURESH11 minutes ago it tells about war and clarion call to peace Comment 0 excellent