Sunday, May 21, 2017

Gunpowder In The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why are they so happy?
what is it that makes them smile?
A little gunpowder in the sky?
I'm confused and laid in bed
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Fernanda Ontiveros
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Britte Ninad 07 June 2018

Lone and cradle of bone Alone I am in crowded cone Phone is stay on the air Amid of voices I hear thousands fear Slough of golden serpent runs on sand of river a stain - zigzag plays a game of dark as aloof surfer!

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Fernanda. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Jorge Valles 23 May 2017

Perfect, I have felt like this before, very painful to be honest.10/10 Fernanda ^^

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 May 2017

Looking at the mirror...... a big 10 for you+++++

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