Gungun Comments

A nice poetic imagination, Shahin. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

i would like to be able to make a bunch of English suggestions/comments. but i'm not always sure what you are trying to say (maybe others understand better than i do) AND it would be too time-comsuming. but if you have specific questions for me, please ask. i assume this has something to do with two people who have a memorable past together but are not together now. what is the meaning of the title? ? and check on the used of lightning. nice effort in using English! bri :)

'So I will carry your memorable past Deep in my heartiest heart' beautiful poem