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very good! keep it up

Thats some deep stuff, man. Keep it up, dude.

well written...nice job! ! !

straight forward and gets right to the point, good work

deep. beautiful. rockin. wut more can i say?

I liked teh writing very much though...oh nvm just good Job!

Beautifully said Alan...I lov3 it so much...keep the peace **Tyease**

i would love for the gun to drop for the guns to stop maybe one day it will happen when everyone will learn to have a heart make more of these young rebel

You are a young man with a heart. That always makes for good poetry. I thought your effort here was commendable. Commendable is a word that is used to compliment someone who did most things right but got some others wrong. These are all things you will learn by doing, as they say, and watching. Very nice! GW62

I love your writing! It speaks the truth! ! Keep on writing your amazing XOXO, Kolee

wow.. thats really good you have talent Cya Miss Smiley

Hey Im absolutely loving this poem. Keep up the good work dude :) :) :)

Alan this poem is amazing, its also very true good write