Monday, December 17, 2012

Gum Comments

Rating: 5.0

My jaw clentches down on the cube shaped bubble gum.
My mouth moves in a circular motion to the gum.
Each bite I take with my teeth, makes a delicious squeeze of juice slime down my throat.
My brain is telling my body to 'chew' in a gear/factory like motion.
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china kelly
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this is really bad 18 April 2019

this is realllllyyy bad

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Matthew Peel 18 December 2012

What an interesting poem... I will never look at chewing gum the same again... Great job! You're invited to read and comment on my poems too. Keep writing!

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