Guilty Pleasure Comments

Is this your life story about how you treat the people that love you the most?

What a joke. Write a poem about betrayal then the next poem is crying about love and lies. Here's an idea, write your next one about empathy, narcissism, karma or shame. Fucking people over, lies and has no place for love in this life. Karma always shows ya

Amazing writing, so talented! ! !

This poem screams innocent betrayal, but what is innocent - or perhaps it's just hidden? I really like this because of the way you've described things in a tasteful and tactful manner. You have described your innermost thoughts quite well. Great job, Lauren do keep writing. -L.C.