Saturday, March 22, 2008
Guilty Eyes Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Eyes met with fierce guilt,
Evidently giving away its feelings
That painful eye clearly met with valor.
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Meg S
22 March 2008
I really like this poem! Good job, the only way I can think to critique is: >>It will hold on to bruises shouldn't it be 'onto'? That's all I can find (sorry, so helpful, I know) . Besides that the poem is great! I enjoyed reading it!
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