Guilty Dog Comments

Swimming in a sea of sadness that surges and swells with significance! Well done my friend!

I liked this. In particular the line 'Happiness hated me.......' and the lines in the last refrain that begin with 'I knew.....' and 'I grew.....'.

I find this to be a wonderfully creative piece of writing. It was pure joy to read. There was crystal clarity of meaning. Which isn't to say that the reader comes away without any thoughts to examine. Just a great piece. I give it high marks. GW62

Guilty of being born in a harsh environment, poor dog. a great and enticing poem, I was engrossed throughout.

Wow, amazing simply amazing. I loved this so much. I think though that the third line is suppose to read 'I was cursed from the womb' without the as. But I could be wrong. My favorite line is 'Happiness hated me, love rejected me and justice ignored me' simply moving. Great, great job. Please feel free to read and comment my works as well please. Thank you Rabbit