I'm not denying how guilty i am
but i'm not trying to hide my fear for that
i would never feel the way i feel right now
please don't try to treat me as i did
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Nice expression...you are getting your feelings out on 'paper'
Repentance on one hand...advice on the other hand...guilty or not...wisdom surely prevails since there...speaking poem bit......10
hi anna its a wonder...mature...very mature impressed...its atenner cheers
very nice poem and the titel oh..... you are the best plz keep writting.
that was a very honest poem on guilt-the feeling was very much there- nice write samanyan
great i like this poem very well written keep writing like this ever and i also want to have some comment's from you?
'I'm not denying how guilty i am but i'm not trying to hide my fear for that.....' a nice proclamation. A poem with diverse taste, nice job done.
You write so well But on the negetive side Look for positives in life they are more But we see and cry only about negetives
Feeling guilty is bad enough. To have people carry on about it makes it far worse. Well done on this composition. Very good.
the blame you feel the hate you see could it all be real and are you sure your the one that's guilty a poem to which i believe write more for me
Deep down everyone is gulty even if they havent done anything wrong they just feel it for some reason... good short poem :)
In reality us all humans are guilty of something or the other which is why we are humans to be. We can only do our best to be a better person and rest is in the hands of god. You expressed your feelings well.
very nice writing....