Thursday, February 14, 2008

Guilty Comments

Rating: 4.5

Standing in the mirror
smoking gun in hand
wondering what just happened
to make me kill this man
...
Read full text

Melissa Casteen
COMMENTS
Matt Johnston 23 October 2008

Nice, you could say there’s a twist at the end but it’s so very true… good people who are victims often blame themselves unjustly. At least that’s what this poem means to me.

0 0 Reply
Saint Cynosure 13 July 2008

This is very good, I will be reading more of you words.

0 0 Reply
Javier Falcon 12 July 2008

Nicely written, I really like the theme, good write...

0 0 Reply
Soul Writer 14 February 2008

Great job, good story :) Peace

0 0 Reply
Tango 14 February 2008

This poem is very good, it has an excellent flow. Well done, Tango

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success