Wednesday, October 11, 2017

Guilt Will Wilt The Sweetest Flower Comments

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Guilt will wilt the sweetest flower,
Cause the very sun to glower,
Though the skies their tears may shower.
Guilt will wilt the sweetest flower.
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Harley White
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Fog Runner 27 October 2017

No one understands the inescapable truth of your poem more than me. You haven't practiced this craft in vain.

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Harley White 28 October 2017

I'm pleased that you can relate so well to this... And thank you for the great encouragement!

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Fog Runner 28 October 2017

So welcome and I look forward to reading you more in the future, Harley!

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Bill Cantrell 12 October 2017

Oh how pleasant! A charming voice for a charming song, it adds to your poetry having a voice to identify with the words, well done.

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Harley White 12 October 2017

Ah, so the sound recording was approved. I’m glad you liked it. Thanks for listening and sharing your reaction!

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Bill Cantrell 11 October 2017

I made a long comment earlier but poemhunter glitches are ever present, so you sing and write music also, you are indeed an artist of more than facet! The truth of the effects of guilt are brought out in your words very nicely, poemhunter is fortunate to have you!

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Harley White 11 October 2017

Thanks very much! The fact is that this was posted before, but I took it down and posted it again, since I didn’t like the video that they had put with it. Also the picture is different. I included my own sound file, but it hasn’t appeared yet, since they have to review it. Anyway, I appreciate your comments as always!

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