Thursday, July 25, 2013

Guilt Seldom Ever Benefits Comments

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It doesn't matter who admits with reason and why...
Guilt seldom ever benefits.
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It doesn't matter who denies and found out to lie...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Peter Vector 25 July 2013

The message rings true, indeed. I must say I enjoyed the lines: No matter who is evil, And worship under steeples... Nobody guilty seldom benefits. And... When the morning dawns, All dew... May disappear. Also, I love the use of repetition in the piece, it really had a feeling of resonance or even an echoing of some sort.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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