Sitting around this empty place,
Full of hollowness and nothingness,
None of the place I wanna be,
The place that I call home.
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I read this poem and felt within it a voice that wishes to be heard and understood. That voice carrying 'Guilt' for not receiving an acceptance. An empty feeling felt is expressed from a longing to be filled with love. Very interesting introspective. Very well done, Alex.
It must have felt bad to feel all that guilt, nobody noticed it, and you were all filled up with all these thoghts! That must have felt awful! I hope you got over it. God Bless All Poets. *Lilly*
This poem clearly identifys the intensity of guilt. Quite sad actually to spend such valuable time dealing with something that no one can see, just sitting there feeling guilt, I ask you 'WHY'? ? ? Good poem Alex--Melvina--(10)
This poem is excelent It is full of fire And spice I can see That your character is like mine You are like a volcano That is erupting I am the same way You express your feelings very well
i have no idea what to say...seriously it is a good poem and everything!
This is one beautiful piece of work.