Guillotine (Revised) Comments
Her heart is a guillotine
Alas once placed I, mine
Out rolled, two pieces anon
The time-doctor was cool
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a very strong write... convincing....so sad... its like being hurt to the deepest...but still expecting something Great write, Sir....it has the power to make us read with awe... and heart to feel the strong pain.... 10+++
Nice one though very sad Sathya, I like your guillotine metaphor,
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7/22/2025 5:40:30 PM # 1.0.0
a very strong write... convincing....so sad... its like being hurt to the deepest...but still expecting something Great write, Sir....it has the power to make us read with awe... and heart to feel the strong pain.... 10+++ Maia