Guide Me Home Poem by Aqua Flower

Guide Me Home

Rating: 5.0


True love will always guide you home
in your heart you're never alone
But I remain homeless
depleted of the full happiness
love that never feels complete
my fire stays burning in this heat
never to be cooled by any rain
mind is driven to insane
guide me to the perfect home
so I will never again feel alone

Thursday, July 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,true love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 06 July 2018

Wow! Great poetry Aqua Flower. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Carl Roussell 05 July 2018

There is an old adage that says home is where the heart is, and your poem expresses it well.

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Aqua Flower 05 July 2018

Thank you for your comment. That old saying and your interpretation of my poem is a match!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 July 2018

typo quickly correct it as QUENCHING kindly

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Aqua Flower 05 July 2018

No need to correct. I know it was a typo thank you for the kind comments and for reading my phone of course I will check yours out when I am able.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 July 2018

wonderful thoughts of quenhcing ones desire as it burns with in as a fire read some of mine moms smiles and mothers day today and see what love can be

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Bill Cantrell 05 July 2018

Wonderful love poem as always, perfect love is hard to find, it happens so many times that when one is not looking, then if finds them, hopeless is a bad state but a little sunshine on the back brings back to life.

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Aqua Flower 05 July 2018

Hi Bill I thought I responded to your comment this morning but I guess I didn't. Thank you for reading this love poem of longing. Sometimes you do find true love at the wrong time. Hopelessness is a state of pure frustration.

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