Friday, November 25, 2005

Guess Who I Am! ! Comments

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I am inside you,
I am around you,
I am on your mind,
We both are entwined.
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hi mia 20 November 2020

i think words because word can be anything

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Sambidhan Acharya 13 June 2006

Good poem, well worded and rhymed too and the meaning it relates is quite touching well done.

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Brian Dorn 03 June 2006

Preeti, you certainly had me 'thinking'... I guess that was the intent? ! Very well done! ! Brian

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Konjit Berhane 25 May 2006

i couldn't guess WhO for i Was thinking nicely done Preeti great poem keep it up **KoNi**

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Krishna Dasani 20 May 2006

you actually made me guess till i got to the end.. hats off preeti.. excellent..

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INNOVATIONAL JUICES AFLOW HERE...WELL DONE, PREETI..... '' GUESS'' YOU GOT A (10) ! '''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Ifedayo Oshin 10 May 2006

Suspense full! You keep me guessing till the end. But poor you, YOU are my thoughts! Pretty poem, Preets!

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Maddy Jones 07 May 2006

I'm guessing it's God! ! lol Great poem! ! ! :) ~*~Miss Maddy~*~

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Jolanta Gradowicz 23 April 2006

You are a very talented writer, I guess :)

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