My eyes met his
Mine portrayed fear
While his were clear
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i just loved this poem, all daughters love their dad so much and your poem shows how much you love him..
ok good one.i also have similar feelings for my dad.dads are really special for daughters and you have expressed it well.
Very cute verse. Nice flow and choice of words which kept me guessing till the end.
I love how this poem kept you guessing on who the mystery man was.. really good poem. ~ Hazel G.E
Lovely poem on your Dad Lakshmi...reminds me of my own father whom I loved and truly respected.10
A great write and a love poem about Dad. A 10. God Bless, Lynn