Thursday, March 19, 2009

Guess Who? ? Comments

Rating: 4.8

My eyes met his
Mine portrayed fear
While his were clear
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Lakshmi Venkataraman
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Lynn Glover 19 September 2009

A great write and a love poem about Dad. A 10. God Bless, Lynn

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 18 September 2009

i just loved this poem, all daughters love their dad so much and your poem shows how much you love him..

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Breanni Sharon Mcduffey 25 March 2009

THAT WAS A VERY GREAT AND WONDERFUL POEM I LOVE IT

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Maitreyee Joshi 24 March 2009

ok good one.i also have similar feelings for my dad.dads are really special for daughters and you have expressed it well.

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Very cute verse. Nice flow and choice of words which kept me guessing till the end.

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Indira Babbellapati 24 March 2009

that's what being a loving daughter is all about...

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Evaughn Gray 23 March 2009

I love how this poem kept you guessing on who the mystery man was.. really good poem. ~ Hazel G.E

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Sandra Martyres 23 March 2009

Lovely poem on your Dad Lakshmi...reminds me of my own father whom I loved and truly respected.10

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Travis Snell 22 March 2009

I very much liked this one very nice

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