Saturday, August 4, 2012

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What a beautiful structure you have!
An indefinite structure;
Changing your shape as you want,
First as dragon, then as dolphin, at last as fox.
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Sina Farajzadeh 05 August 2012

It's amazing dear! Wow! While reading your poem I was just asking myself and imagining what this creature is? ! I was also afraid that you may not tell us what it is. But you told it and it's an artistic poem. Good one. By the way, your id name reminds me of two characters of William Golding's masterpiece, The Lord of the Flies. Piggy and Simon. I'd be glad to know your ideas about my poems. Thanks.

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