Monday, January 14, 2008

Guess I Was Wrong Comments

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i was mad at you, for tearing up my heart
i thought that we would forever be apart,
that what i felt was not mutual;
but i guess that i was wrong.
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Baby Blue
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A positive love poem with just a slight sense of shaky hope. Nice work, L&T

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Beautiful Cole 24 January 2008

I Have Got My Heart Hurt Before And I Know That Person Been Hurt To But ummm I Feel this Poem I Really Like It And Im Proud Of You Baby Blue! ! *Love Always Tempestt Aka Pumpkin Robinson*

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Katharine O'Neal 14 January 2008

awwwww! >< love it, its almost sad at first when it hints at a difficult past and hard letdowns, but the end is so positive and sure it just makes me really happy and bright and hopeful. the last two lines of the third part 'that i might bet my heart broken, / but it tells me that you wouldn't do that.' is my favorate part because the amount of trust it shows is so beautuful and ideal and inspiring (plus i can relate to the feeling, even if it turned out false for me) anyways, nice poem Kath

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