Thursday, June 21, 2012

Guardian Incubus' Lament Comments

Rating: 4.5

For every girl that captures my heart
Causes my heart to beat short
Of a close centimeter
Since I am nothing but a decimator
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Anthony Han
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Romeo Della Valle 08 July 2012

An outburst of the heart beautifully crafted and it is deep and touching! This amazing outcry is coming from a young soul that should set his or priorities straight to avoid major crashes so early in life. We all go through this chaotic stage in our lives as could see in the description I give in my poems, even at my age, I still feel the side effects of loving someone like you do! If you read my poem: In Pursuit of Happiness you could see it! This great heartfelt write gives you away and clearly shows your great emotions and poetic talent to bring you all the way to the top of the Poetry World one day as long as you keep writing and learning from other poets writes and your own experience gained along the way of your tender life. Keep inspiring the World with your honest and powerful writes! 10+++ Keep it up Champ! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Monterey Park. Raised in H.H.
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