Saturday, May 11, 2013

Guardian Angel Comments

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As soon I realize I am awake
I see devils rampaging ahead,
And as clearly as afar I can see
Their target isn't anyone but me.
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Ketan Hukare
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 November 2018

She saved me, saved me again. Presented a smile that made me insane. In the end, she says goodbye forever. But I've grabbed her leg and I'm going with her. this is wonderful... She protected me as she was going away i held on to her feet and i am flying with her into the world of the heaven... very nice really dear poet. ton

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Unwritten Soul 13 July 2013

This is cool write! clap for you_Soul

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Nader Baheri 13 July 2013

sometimes demons may be our guardian angel.hahaha joking.this is so great.every one of us needs a guardian angel.that must be ourselves.enjoyed cuz i ve always been interested in such topics.the climax undoubtedly is the last stanza. cheers~nb

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Meena Mustafa 02 July 2013

Beautiful lines: Tearing apart clouds, in a golden light, With lots of hope, love and delight. With her glowing hand she wipes me tear, Tosses away all the pain I bear. Touches my hand, and I begin to heal, Forget the lumps which I used to feel. Great job :)

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Simran Arora 30 June 2013

Nicly framed, and expland...kep going frnd.. I request you to read my poems and comment. Thanx u waiting 4 yor cmnt...

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