Saturday, April 19, 2008

Guardian Angel Comments

Rating: 4.8

When I'm gone
please don't cry.
Release your tears now
so I'll have wings to fly.
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Aisha Love
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Akhtar Jawad 18 October 2014

A piece of beauty, a work of art, what a lovely poem!

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Lenny Camacho 18 October 2014

like it... poem starts like an open wound, but carries you well into the assurance that there will be healing...

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Savita Tyagi 18 October 2014

Lovely poem. All should read. Fear of death removed so tenderly.

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Babatunde Aremu 18 October 2014

Great thought! Tears after our exit are not heard by us. I like this poem. Keep the pen alive

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Soulful Heart 18 October 2014

10/10.........................a tear drop to break u free from the shackles of painful memories..............yet a binding medium of common feelings..............I invite u to read my poem 'catharsis' lovely poem

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 October 2014

Death is the departure from earth to heaven...we should not cry, no tears needed...nice one

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Gajanan Mishra 18 October 2013

good love, thanks. I like it Aisha.

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Jayne Davies 18 October 2013

I love this poem! Well done to you!

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Liliana ~el 18 October 2013

Becoming one.. letting go

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Kelvin Owusu 24 October 2012

Beautifully written really warms the heart, great work

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Mark Dillon 18 October 2012

beautiful poem, well written, soft gentle and loving.

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Hunter Hunters 18 October 2012

Aisha, you work is nice while sombody bines your heart somebody breaks so am invitin u 2 read my poem break up and others.

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Anita Sehgal 18 October 2012

lovely, enjoyed, a10

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Blue Eyes 24 August 2008

what a romantic poem! i love it.

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Kye Kurion 19 April 2008

I felt such a gentle tone in the poem, you use literary devices well.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 April 2008

well written aisha..keep up

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