When I'm gone
please don't cry.
Release your tears now
so I'll have wings to fly.
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like it... poem starts like an open wound, but carries you well into the assurance that there will be healing...
Lovely poem. All should read. Fear of death removed so tenderly.
Great thought! Tears after our exit are not heard by us. I like this poem. Keep the pen alive
10/10.........................a tear drop to break u free from the shackles of painful memories..............yet a binding medium of common feelings..............I invite u to read my poem 'catharsis' lovely poem
Death is the departure from earth to heaven...we should not cry, no tears needed...nice one
Aisha, you work is nice while sombody bines your heart somebody breaks so am invitin u 2 read my poem break up and others.
I felt such a gentle tone in the poem, you use literary devices well.
A piece of beauty, a work of art, what a lovely poem!