Tuesday, March 11, 2008

Guardian Angel Comments

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I watch your face.
Expressionless, Emotionless, Motionless.
No smile, no grin, just sleep.
I say I'll give you this...
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Benson Muthoka
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Harlan Simantel 12 March 2008

I believe in guardian angels and am somewhat familiar with mine, a female spirit, loving and caring. I know she likes feeling appreciated so your poem rings true with me. Thanks for writing it, and well done. Brevity is always best, in my book; you said a lot in a few lines.

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Benson Muthoka

Benson Muthoka

Machakos - Kenya
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