Friday, August 29, 2008

Guardian Comments

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Guardian

Guard well our bell, our precious little one.
Give her comfort, she needs support not fear.
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C H Sund
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Dawn Slanker 02 September 2008

This is a lovely and beautifully written sonnet. I can see any parent reciting this for their little one and even as a prayer which is what I thought it was until the sweet little surprise in the end. Excellent write full of heart.

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C H Sund

C H Sund

Wahpeton, ND (USA)
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