.. ≫ *my First Cut****(Dark Comments

this is... undescribable. it really made me think. i'm kinda speechless. love, Heart of Ice

Nice one Touching Rgds Nooruddeen

touching.... first cut of the heart.. first love...first heartbreak... nicely written, my friend.. lovelots, Maia

see......... sorry. but, life eh? ? choose virtue.....

Very good poem I understood it right away. I think I reaily felt what you wrote.

I really like that! It's a bit complicated for me to read since I'm young, but once I read it a few times I get what it all is saying. Please stop by, and read some of mine if you find time.

knowing love isn't just a pretty face....good line. Entitled - First cut then you start with Like a virgin to love -made me curious as what your poem is all about....which i may say a good ingredient in a poem.

great expressions indeed.. Eyen.. you said it well.. what better man to talk of bleeding heart than you.. nice 10++ with lots of love shan

vry nyc poem! ! i really lyked it! ! plx read my poemz to if u hve time n plx cmmnt on them to so i knw u lyked them or nt plz!

you oredy told... complicated but sweet and nice at all well done doctor luwi

A nice poem written. Well expressed thoughts!

Well and artistically expressed emotions! I enjoyed it.-)

I'm impressed, you say too much in a few words; it's absolute simplicity along with great complexity. Your idea is too deep but expressed very well. I love your choice of words. Brilliant

Excellent sir.... I like it.

sometimes the talk of love puritya nd true love appear to me to, be archaic and effervescent terms....everyo9ne has his own interpretation and spin....yet i feel a unified definition may be ever elusive...yet a very nice portrayal...i liked it cheers

nice extended metaphor: ''Like a virgin to love I felt a miracle for first time As your presence touched my life'' indeed, Eyan, without purity, love is not..really love...really happiness...but an illusion..10+++ from me..

is this how u feel......i love this one man eyan you're the best poem writter i ever met...will ever read cause haven't seen u yeat but good job

love the meaning behind ur poem <3 10

Mastery scene of loss and betrayal was shown in this work.Heart throbbing! ! !

We never forget the first time our heart is hurt and this piece brings that pain right into focus..... first cut is the worst cut I would say..... 10 from Fay.