Saturday, May 23, 2009

. ≫ I Miss That Rose Comments

Rating: 3.3

The beauty in a rose
Breathe joy in many lives
When it is gone
Bitterness of it's love
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Eyan Desir
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Desiree Burdick 27 March 2010

such a beautiful poem

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Jean Dament 16 January 2010

A heartfelt, sweet poem about love & loss. Well done. in the last line you have 'sweeten'-it should be 'sweetened' ok Thanks for sharing your talents with us. Spiritsong

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Lady Grace 28 June 2009

this rose is a lucky one..very beautiful friend..grace

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Sherif Monem 15 June 2009

Very beautiful poem.

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sky dreams 10 June 2009

a rose is a great symbol to use for a lost love.. i really enjoyed reading this

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J.J. Bradford 07 June 2009

thats some good symbolism, i can relate...great job

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Not A Dream Choice 04 June 2009

Well witten...I miss my rose too...

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Allysyn Bryant 03 June 2009

a sweet poem very nice

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 June 2009

lovely crafted... so sweet a poem... expressive.... 10+++ and my vote, my friend _maia_

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Ravi Sathasivam 03 June 2009

'My mouth waters. My soul hungers My heart suffers My skin shivers I miss that rose' Its sad but beautifully written. I felt very deep in my heart. Take care

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Free Bird 02 June 2009

Not bad well written keep up the good work

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Serenity Prayer 02 June 2009

great job. i like it. very sweet, but sad at the same time.

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Well written Keep it up 10++

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Kealeboga Gaolehelwe 02 June 2009

great poem really atleast it didnt concern to much rythming which to me is kind of irrating and senseless so job well done, i will keep on reading some of your materials

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Ravi A 02 June 2009

Anice poem. The first few lines really elevate the poem.

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Obinna Eruchie 02 June 2009

a good reading on the bitter effects of the rose missing in one's heart.

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Shy Beauty Raven 02 June 2009

this is a beautiful poem

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Gargi Saha 02 June 2009

A wonderful poem. U get 10++++++

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Harun Al Nasif 02 June 2009

Very touchy. Keep it up.

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Martine Kolber 02 June 2009

Very beautiful, deep felt poem! I like it very much; -) Take care, Martine

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