The beauty in a rose
Breathe joy in many lives
When it is gone
Bitterness of it's love
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A heartfelt, sweet poem about love & loss. Well done. in the last line you have 'sweeten'-it should be 'sweetened' ok Thanks for sharing your talents with us. Spiritsong
a rose is a great symbol to use for a lost love.. i really enjoyed reading this
lovely crafted... so sweet a poem... expressive.... 10+++ and my vote, my friend _maia_
'My mouth waters. My soul hungers My heart suffers My skin shivers I miss that rose' Its sad but beautifully written. I felt very deep in my heart. Take care
great poem really atleast it didnt concern to much rythming which to me is kind of irrating and senseless so job well done, i will keep on reading some of your materials
a good reading on the bitter effects of the rose missing in one's heart.
Very beautiful, deep felt poem! I like it very much; -) Take care, Martine
such a beautiful poem