Tuesday, November 13, 2018

Grumpy Company Comments

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I don't want to be grumpy company.
I don't want to dampen your happiness
By laying my complaints down on paper
And them sending them to you, expecting solutions.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Bill Cantrell 13 November 2018

Wow, a wonderful poem! Each stanza perfectly leads to the next, ...maybe in dreams I can be someone vital, someone who excites passions in others, who incites passion, leading them to some higher plane, and the last line makes the whole poem complete! ! what a great poem! ! !

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Suzanne Hayasaki 13 November 2018

Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a kind response to the poem!

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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