Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Grumpy Comments

Rating: 5.0

My grumpy old man side is visiting again
Moaning and groaning, the usual things
Why is this? Why is that?
Questions, questions, flowing fast
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John A'Hern
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Phil Soar 27 August 2018

Well written and so me as well. Almost everyone calls me Grumpy (even the wife) so the words ring so true.

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Lodigiana Poetess 19 October 2017

Loved this! made me smile as I suspect I am pretty much on a similar road! ..10

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John Ahern 19 October 2017

Thank you for commenting, nothing wrong with a bit of grumpy now and then, just have a friend close by to rescue you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2017

Amazing and perceptional attitude is brilliantly reflected in this poem. Imaginary smoke rises from ears. Grumpy old man side is visiting again. Wisely drafted poem is shared here...10

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John Ahern 18 October 2017

Thank you for your kind words, this unwanted visitor visits when least expected.

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Sister Frances 18 October 2017

lol thanks for the laugh..grumpy man exited stage right, classic :)

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John Ahern 18 October 2017

The real life version is quite funny, after the event. I just wish that the exit was permanent. Thank you for your comment.

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