Saturday, March 22, 2014

Grudge Of The Universe Comments

Rating: 4.5

A box of tissues is soaked through
A pink hand written, unbesmirched
by any deeply blue
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Nathan Coppedge
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Nathan Coppedge 13 April 2014

Re: Charles Monroe, Thank you. Since you say 'lovely' I know you must mean a compliment, although your rap-like lyrics do not seem altogether clear to me. Could you explain the meaning of your rap? It's probably more obvious than I realize...

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Charles Monroe 13 April 2014

Lovely. Finally something somewhat relative To my competitive arrogant narrative. Of Judges and Nurses We've grudged Universes In uniform basis, Were filling the spaces. Of Jokers and Aces Remember the faces For faceless creations are Agents in Matrix'- Remind, we, the basics To live without bracelets But only amazements We've found in the basements Of mongoose and Dayton's We've traveled the pavements. And to remain gracious, In midst of New Havens, And Grudges and Nathans, We've titled us, Nameless. P.X

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