Grubs And Disire Comments

when i read this poem it made me think about what a woman with a loose morality said to me way back in my past she said a quick wash will wipe away my guilt and i thought to myself will she wash her soul as well good write david regards AJS

I like the poem, but it just seems like you capitalize the wrong words. Its completely up to you how you write your poetry, but when you capitalize a whole word, you are usually trying to put emphasis on it.The words 'like' or 'the' really dont need emphasis in my opinion. Nice poem anyway, Michael