Thursday, September 3, 2009

Grown-Up Tall Comments

Rating: 5.0

You dumped me,
in soil of miseries,
I proliferated to green,
look back at me,
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Sahar Sahar
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Afzal Shauq 14 December 2009

I am grown-up tall, I am umbrella to kids, i am home for birds, i am feeding hundreds, with my sweet fruits, wow what asymbolic way written this poem is...romantic, reality based expressions, positive thinking makes your message very rich and heart catcy one..Your style is very much poetic and I feel a story behind this theme..a lovely written poem..well done sahar..10/10

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i see your change.. you matured well,

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When i needed you, For some reason. a very cryptic ending! ! Good work Beta

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Rehana Nazli 06 September 2009

I will be generous to protect you, I will not dump you 5 feet deep, as you dumped me. for no reason, When i needed you, For some reason. fighting spirit in your poem. Good rythem throughout.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 03 September 2009

a heartfelt poem! you're Generous Sahar! the failure makes you strong. the pain makes you wise. nice nice!

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