Grown-Up Tall Comments

I am grown-up tall, I am umbrella to kids, i am home for birds, i am feeding hundreds, with my sweet fruits, wow what asymbolic way written this poem is...romantic, reality based expressions, positive thinking makes your message very rich and heart catcy one..Your style is very much poetic and I feel a story behind this theme..a lovely written poem..well done sahar..10/10

i see your change.. you matured well,

When i needed you, For some reason. a very cryptic ending! ! Good work Beta

I will be generous to protect you, I will not dump you 5 feet deep, as you dumped me. for no reason, When i needed you, For some reason. fighting spirit in your poem. Good rythem throughout.

a heartfelt poem! you're Generous Sahar! the failure makes you strong. the pain makes you wise. nice nice!