Tuesday, August 13, 2024

Growing Up Without You, Daddy Comments

Rating: 5.0

A boy so young, just seven years old
Lost his father, his heart turned cold
A pain so deep, a wound so wide
Left with tears, and a sorrow inside
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Entrush Chakma
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Bharati Nayak 14 September 2024

Your father must be proud of you.He may be showering his blessings from heaven.Even in distress you stayed positive and proved yourself.A very beautiful poem.

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Entrush Chakma 19 September 2025

Thanks for your beautiful feedback

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2024

And though he's not here, his legacy remains A guiding light, that shines through the pain.. I lost my Daddy too at a very young age. The pain remains.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2024

Once again I give this very fascnating poem TOP Marks,5 Stars full

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2024

Congratulations for this magnificent touching poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2024

Life journey excellently worded, I am touched very much and deepest impressed

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