Growing Up Without You, Daddy Poem by Entrush Chakma

Growing Up Without You, Daddy

Rating: 5.0


A boy so young, just seven years old
Lost his father, his heart turned cold
A pain so deep, a wound so wide
Left with tears, and a sorrow inside

Memories of laughter, of joy and of play
Now echoes of a bygone day
He remembers his father's loving face,
And the words he spoke, in a gentle pace.

After his father's passing, he had a dream where his father appeared to him and said:
'Son, don't consume bad things that can harm your life.'
'Don't do work that society can't abide.'
'Be a good person, and always stand with pride.'

He remembers these words, every single day,
And tries to live up, to his father's way.
He grows up strong, but with a scar,
A reminder of who's not there.

Years pass by, and he reaches Class 10,
A milestone achieved, but his father's not there to see him win.
He wonders what could have been,
If his father were here, to share in his glee.

After Class 10 result, he felt a sense of pride,
Remained his father, how happy he would be inside.
He thought, 'Father, I've made you proud, I know',
And tears of joy, began to flow.

He felt his father's presence, in that moment so bright.
A sense of approval, that shone like a light.
He knew his father, was smiling down on him.
Feeling proud, of the person he'd become within.

Though his father's gone, his memory stays.
A bittersweet reminder of happier days.
The boy becomes a man, with a heart so bold.
But deep inside, a piece of him, forever cold.

He follows his father's advice, every step of the way.
And tries to make him proud, every single day.
And though he's not here, his legacy remains.
A guiding light, that shines through the pain.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Entrush Chakma (2005) a Poet and a Rapper was born at Tunga Sora, CADC, Mizoram, India. His short name is ETC. He wrote a poem named, 'Growing Up Without You, Daddy'. When he was just 7 years old, his father had died. He had taken his early education from Borapansury, CADC. In this poem he explained the journey of a young boy who loses his father at a tender age. Actually in this poem he explained his own life. Let's read his life journey without his father.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 14 September 2024

Your father must be proud of you.He may be showering his blessings from heaven.Even in distress you stayed positive and proved yourself.A very beautiful poem.

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Entrush Chakma 19 September 2025

Thanks for your beautiful feedback

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2024

And though he's not here, his legacy remains A guiding light, that shines through the pain.. I lost my Daddy too at a very young age. The pain remains.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2024

Once again I give this very fascnating poem TOP Marks,5 Stars full

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2024

Congratulations for this magnificent touching poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2024

Life journey excellently worded, I am touched very much and deepest impressed

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