Monday, July 3, 2023

Growing Up In The Southern States In The 1800s Before The U. S. Civil War...[ Dwarf; Family; Gunsmith; Slavery; Farming; Freedom; Longish ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

I woke up and before I got out of bed I thought...
about words of a poem which I'd not yet wrought.
I once heard about something 'God' had 'wrought',
but THAT is not what, by tonight, I hope I've brought
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COMMENTS
Susan Williams 13 July 2023

I died laughing a quarter of the way through this jaunt through your very active and twisty-turny mind of yours! ! ! ! Turning Tommy Twit loose on the public was incredibly provocatiive of you....5 stars for each of the 5000 poems in this poem!

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Bri Edwards 14 July 2023

My condolances on your death! ! ! And I REALLY think you've exagerrated the truth of the matters at hand aka? ? ? Provocative is good, but I'm sorry you died only 1/4 of the way through. ; (

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2023

TO ALL OF MY READERS (ESPECIALLY IF YOU LIKE HUMOR & good rhyming, AS I DO) : Do yourself a favor and read Sheeya Hacks' Her Big Tail Caused Endless Trails

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2023

Time shouldn't go through this kind of story that makes us dream for a better tomorrow . Let us keep reading and sharing this kind of story so that it will never be forgotten by the new generations. Unforgettable. Top Marks!

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2023

Merci beaucoup...[[reminds me of our 'departed hens']]...Rose Marie. ;)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2023

What a beautiful and meaningful poem! Informative and very inspiring. A great depiction of a life story that provides motivation and encouragement to conquer adversities in life's journey. A well thought out poem.

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2023

Eh, I just copied this poem out of an old dusty tome I found in a 'Used Books' shop. Believe me. Well..... : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 05 July 2023

My first choice for a title was, apparently, .........Tomfoolery & Bri....[ Foolish trifling; ridiculous behavior; nonsense. ] It is TRUE.

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Bri Edwards 05 July 2023

Readers, Not that anyone will care, ....but I think it IS interesting, ....today my record of emails (sent to myself in my process of writing this poem) reminded me that the currect title is the THIRD one I had in mind for this.

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M. Asim Nehal 04 July 2023

Your APPETITE to write about the PAST is on the rise and ALSO your SPEEDOMETER is showing 1800 Now. Full 5 *****

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2023

'SPEEDOMETER'? That looks 'funny/weird'. I may never have spelled nor read the word 'speedometer'. I JUST 'PUT THE PEDAL TO THE METAL' so to speak. : )

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Susan Williams 13 July 2023

M Aim Nehal--- excellent comment---couldn't be said better

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M. Asim Nehal 04 July 2023

Revisiting and unearthing the bygone in history and employing our personal creativity is a challenging endeavor, you accomplished it splendidly through this verse. Typically, we endeavor to anticipate and venture into the future, envisioning how things will appear or appear differently.

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2023

I enjoyed a lot, reading and commenting on: Ants On Her Body ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal. I CAN 'venture into the future', and plan to do so soon when I return to my native planet. ;) thanks for your comment.

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

(cont.) His was an INTERESTING LIFE & made him a wealthy man. He stopped growing between 6 mo. and his teens, and never reached a 'normal' height. He amassed wealth and married.

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

(cont.) 'General Tom Thumb' (a 'stage neme', as many Hollywood actors hava had, ], began performing [ billed as an ] before he was 7 years old. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

I got a little mixed up between the height [not heighth] of my fictional Tom Terwillager and the recorded height [not heigth] of the American dwarf 'General Tom Thumb' [NOT his real name]. (cont.) .. (cont.)

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Jim McGill 03 July 2023

I like it Bri. You perked my interest and held me through the entire poem. I will read it again tomorrow.

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2023

Jim, thanks much, ok, very much, for reading and your comment. bri ;)

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Bharati Nayak 03 July 2023

The poem about 'T' is very interesting and holds readers' attention.In the concluding part I wanted to know more about T's family and how the Civil war impacted their lives.

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2023

Bharati, I MIGHT tell you over dinner sometime. Is it a 'date'? ? ? ...........Ok, T & M lived happily ever after, as happily as their circumstances allowed anyway. . Then they died while riding the new 'zipline' on Mt. Everest.

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